Creative Work 192

please can I have feedback to chinchilla_nutter@yahoo.co.uk
my bleeding arms
pour forth my pain
release this hurt
i hold in vain

release the guilt
release the fears
release the darkness
through blood and tears

flow forth and save
my troubled mind
banish this demon
that does bind

expel the voices
in my head
let me be safe
whilst in bed

destroy the nightmares
destoy each thought
of the suicide demon
let him get caught

release my brain
release my soul
let me take pleasure
when I acheive a goal

let any light
enter my pit
punish the cause
the evil git

give him the pain
give him the fears
let him carry all
for many years

he betrayed my trust
i died inside
let him be ashamed
let HIM hide

let him cut himself
let him feel the stress
let him be messed up
let his mind compress

let him have the headaches
let him have the pain
let his mind crack
under all the strain

let him use the pills
to keep him alive
let him see no goals
on which to drive

let him see no light
let him feel no joy
let him scream inside
let his mind destroy

let me be normal
let me be sane
let me be happy
and not live in pain

let him

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