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Creative Work 80
Pieces of FEELING
Icy cold stares
and melted hearts
feelings all mixed
and broken in parts
Sunny outside
and freezing inside
im all smiley
but hurt inside
I feel like screaming
to make things all right
but then again I cry
and smile with all my might
I gather scattered pieces
and fix them up with glue
i try to feel all happy
but then im still blue.
avonne
"continuation" ==>> Pieces of FEELING
Pieces of feeling~
broken and torn
sit on the ground,
lost and forlorn...
though glued back
life had some setbacks...
and on the ground...
a crushing sound...
my heart's been crushed again.
Now into a million pieces
never to be repaired.
all the damage's done and gone
but I dont wallow in despair.
Slowly again I pick up
piece by peice
and put them into a cup...
And my tiring process
starts again
and on I progress...
till my heart, a whole I regain.
avonne
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