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The little girl is hurting,
Cause her hopes are torn in two.
Her feelings all been shattered,
And her mind is black and blue.
A drip-drip-drop of deep red blood,
Can drain the drowning pain.
But this is no solution,
In a world that's gone insane.
Today? New day? The days to come?
Nothing's new at all.
Monotony eternal,
You've hit the downward fall.
Ground like broken glass.
The ice you treat is thin.
The tunnel's long and narrow,
And all light fast turning dim.
Alone, alone, truley alone,
When nothing's what you've got.
And this is how it has to be,
And this is how you'll rot.
To take your life or fake your life,
Cause none of this is real.
And life holds no true meaning,
When numbness is all you feel.
Hard to refuse the reaper's hand,
Take the final solution.
The world is cold, long sinse grown old.
Torment, turmoil, persecution.
My hearts in pain, my life's a mess,
Depression take's its tole.
Confused, misused and hurting,
A person no longer whole.
Kate (17)
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